My HMD post is here, though I'm also good with crit in this post. Anon, non-anon, whatever.

I'm especially interested in:
* Any feedback on Tara's voice -- does she sound like herself?
* Do I give enough in narrative that you can tell where my character is coming from?

I know I have been flaky and generally not around as much for several months, and I think the reasons for that are understandable. That said, if I have actually been rude with it in some way, please let me know.